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What's it take

These days

 

To write a poem

 

That makes the world go mad

That brings the crowds to their feet

That spreads like wildfire

Through a dry winter forest

 

Is it those excessively long words?

The ostentatiously loquacious

Platitudinous ramblings

Of an insecure mind aspiring

To authentic intellect?

 

Is it perhaps...

     the "creativity"

               of      varied      spacing

  or...    could it be..... the lack

                              of capitalization

               the loathsome little letters

               screaming out

                         hey, look at us!

         ... or maybe it's

               the punctuation marks,

     littered, haphazardly

          through the text

                    (whether used correctly)

               or, theyre not?!

     despite worrds mispeled

          and a grammar might is broken

   can these gimmicks increase interest

        though miswritten or misspoken?

 

Is the trick alliteration

Whose bite brightly bids us

To center on the snappy sounds?

Although all along

     unvoiced underneath

Ideas idle in the isles

   (or perhaps the aisles)

Of the mind

To meld and craft and bind

Our thorough thoughts

And worthy words

Into lines

Which

Heard by herds

Raise the

                  Praise for which we

                  Privately, desperately

                  Pray

 

Maybe it's a magical mix

Of splendid in-your-head rhythm

Marvelous meter that perfectly clicks

Flowing smoothly without schism

 

Well-spaced stanzas

Well-used time

Well-crafted phrases

Well-thought-out rhymes

 

Well, maybe not...

     those gems are often ignored

     cast-aside, unread, even abhorred

 

Why?

 

Because the modern world

doesn't need your rules

your restrictions

your regulations

your misguided boundaries

your oppression

your antiquated ideas

   of "the right way"

   to write

   to speak

   to act

   to live

   to (fill in the blank)

 

No, what the modern world needs

is

Negation!

Contradiction!

Resistance!

Revolt!

 

And poetry whose words

Say the same thing

Repeat the same meaning

Echo the same lyrics

Rephrase the same thoughts

But in an ever-so-slightly

Different

Varied

Altered

Adjusted

Changed up way

 

Line

After line

Of synonyms

          over

               and

                    over

                         and

                         over

                         again

 

-----

 

What's it take

These days

 

To not give in

To narcissism's spiral?

 

But more importantly:

What's it take

 

To make my poem go viral?

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Written by
MicMag
M / Texas
Published
Aug 12, 2018
Lines·Words
107·325
Notes

Only halfway cynically written, I swear!

Tags
#poetry#freeverse#whatsthesecret#cynicism#narcissism#viral
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