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This time I'm speaking my mind out As we've been restrained to express by the society's most important seniors in which undeserved privilege overshadowed the true essence of beliefs and traditions. In many aspects the youth is believed to be the hope yet elders traced a trap through our most awaited start. Dreams were differed, sanity is shattered by the mere false authority of the few abusive elders whom they have thought of stepping on amateurs would mean respect or submission. Sad to say the past brilliance is now spoiled by the lack of calcium the inability to cope up with technologies the traditionally wrong mindset the ego of a native the pride of a pioneer. Past experiences would make you a better person they say but frankly the new generation forces the beam of innovation that could make today a better station to dwell in. If and only if this corrected mistake was never rectified at all. - a Youth
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Mar 3, 2017
Mar 3, 2017 at 7:32 AM UTC
A Corrected Mistake
This time I'm speaking my mind out As we've been restrained to express by the society's most important seniors in which undeserved privilege overshadowed the true essence of beliefs and traditions. In many aspects the youth is believed to be the hope yet elders traced a trap through our most awaited start. Dreams were differed, sanity is shattered by the mere false authority of the few abusive elders whom they have thought of stepping on amateurs would mean respect or submission. Sad to say the past brilliance is now spoiled by the lack of calcium the inability to cope up with technologies the traditionally wrong mindset the ego of a native the pride of a pioneer. Past experiences would make you a better person they say but frankly the new generation forces the beam of innovation that could make today a better station to dwell in. If and only if this corrected mistake was never rectified at all. - a Youth
seniority would always mean authority and privilege but being one does not let you disrespect and heartlessly offend youngsters. this belief is a sin and is never a right thing to do. our society has always been a joke yet it is no fun at all.
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Mar 3, 2017
Mar 3, 2017 at 7:32 AM UTC
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