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Heavy chest, a struggle to inhale, Stranded in my own despair. People are now the ammonia. Triggers for my misophonia. A choice predicted to change fate Never thought I'd fall in hate. Strength that's holding back the rage, One step closer... on the edge. Now I walk on this fine line. Never stepping on cloud nine. And I'm told that what is mine It's already put aside. And I wonder, what's my destiny? Never saw the good of me. Always out of harmony. Wishing to live happily. Now I know how Atlas felt. No one there but himself, Holding heavens while in hell. Was it worth for what he bled ? And all this states of mind, I can't escape, I must comply. One last message, no reply. Maybe one day I'll be fine.
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Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 7:33 AM UTC
Atlas
Heavy chest, a struggle to inhale, Stranded in my own despair. People are now the ammonia. Triggers for my misophonia. A choice predicted to change fate Never thought I'd fall in hate. Strength that's holding back the rage, One step closer... on the edge. Now I walk on this fine line. Never stepping on cloud nine. And I'm told that what is mine It's already put aside. And I wonder, what's my destiny? Never saw the good of me. Always out of harmony. Wishing to live happily. Now I know how Atlas felt. No one there but himself, Holding heavens while in hell. Was it worth for what he bled ? And all this states of mind, I can't escape, I must comply. One last message, no reply. Maybe one day I'll be fine.
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33/M/Dublin
Nov 18, 2025
Nov 18, 2025 at 7:33 AM UTC
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