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Oh sweet Atlantic, let me sink to the most deep for when I am beneath your waves funny, I find it easier to breathe. I find my unearthly paradise, everything is suspended in exquisite animation, for miles of everlasting sea. Sweet child, do you understand the utmost power of the tides? They will take you anywhere and everywhere with or without your consent in mind. A wise woman once told me an old native story, about paddling your canoe through the river of life. There are people, who try and fight the current after a short while, they become too tired to carry on; thus, they are swept away on whichever path the water may follow. There are people, who simply lay back and expect the river to take them wherever they want to go, they expect, no matter what it'll guide them home. But, rivers have a mind of their own and they are quickly swallowed by the water as their canoe shatters on the sharp river rocks. Then, there are those who learn to navigate the river who know when to fight the current to avoid the most trecherous boulders and to also know when the water is taking them on the journey to love, bliss and nirvana just around the riverbend.
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 11:40 PM UTC
just around the riverbend
Oh sweet Atlantic, let me sink to the most deep for when I am beneath your waves funny, I find it easier to breathe. I find my unearthly paradise, everything is suspended in exquisite animation, for miles of everlasting sea. Sweet child, do you understand the utmost power of the tides? They will take you anywhere and everywhere with or without your consent in mind. A wise woman once told me an old native story, about paddling your canoe through the river of life. There are people, who try and fight the current after a short while, they become too tired to carry on; thus, they are swept away on whichever path the water may follow. There are people, who simply lay back and expect the river to take them wherever they want to go, they expect, no matter what it'll guide them home. But, rivers have a mind of their own and they are quickly swallowed by the water as their canoe shatters on the sharp river rocks. Then, there are those who learn to navigate the river who know when to fight the current to avoid the most trecherous boulders and to also know when the water is taking them on the journey to love, bliss and nirvana just around the riverbend.
More words.. teachings from my Nana.. life is a river
biyoekii
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28/F/Canadian
Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 11:40 PM UTC
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