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i once dated a boy who found it "adorable" that i know how to change my headlights      fill my radiator      change the oil      and notice every stopsign as i'm halfway through it he dumped me via text before that there was a boy who loved my lack of first person capitalization      my over-use of metaphores and similies      the way i personify the night      and practice preforming poetry in the shower he took off into the sunset with my journal in his shoulder-sack and somewhere in between i stopped asking myself what it means threw up my hands      and learned to enjoy the ride
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Mar 11, 2014
Mar 11, 2014 at 9:27 PM UTC
there's that buddy holly song with the rollercoaster...
i once dated a boy who found it "adorable" that i know how to change my headlights      fill my radiator      change the oil      and notice every stopsign as i'm halfway through it he dumped me via text before that there was a boy who loved my lack of first person capitalization      my over-use of metaphores and similies      the way i personify the night      and practice preforming poetry in the shower he took off into the sunset with my journal in his shoulder-sack and somewhere in between i stopped asking myself what it means threw up my hands      and learned to enjoy the ride
"every day, it's a'gettin closer, rolling faster than a roller coster. love like yours..."
Sparrowfreckles
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Mar 11, 2014
Mar 11, 2014 at 9:27 PM UTC
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