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Sweet summer breeze compared to leaves falls gently as the sky fills with colourful trees. The branches stretch out to welcome me and gravity becomes my minds needs. The rain explains a way for spectral excellence to prove that mist contains powerful sense. Ecliptic fog that shows beauty and causes shock explains life’s way of creating love.
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Mar 3, 2018
Mar 3, 2018 at 1:14 AM UTC
Rainbow
Sweet summer breeze compared to leaves falls gently as the sky fills with colourful trees. The branches stretch out to welcome me and gravity becomes my minds needs. The rain explains a way for spectral excellence to prove that mist contains powerful sense. Ecliptic fog that shows beauty and causes shock explains life’s way of creating love.
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18/M/England
Mar 3, 2018
Mar 3, 2018 at 1:14 AM UTC
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