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I saw a man on the subway today eating a cup of vanilla ice cream but it was no mundane sighting this man looked worn like he'd seen some **** and been through it as well this man sitting across from me on the subway was eating this cup of vanilla ice cream in such a way that it made me think quite a bit about life this man eating a cup of vanilla ice cream was eating it as though it was the first thing he'd ever tasted; he was eating it as though it was the best ice cream he's ever had; he was eating it as though it was the last meal he'd ever eat; all at once this man was eating this cup of vanilla ice cream in such a captivating way I couldn't take my eyes off of him he was careful about it eating slow and steady with each bite he would close his eyes and it almost looked like he smiled as he tasted it each and every time a man sitting across from me on the subway eating a cup of vanilla ice cream when i get to his age I want to look that peaceful and that content despite whatever **** I'll know this man eating a cup of vanilla ice cream made me think about life and i believe it's so beautiful
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Aug 18, 2014
Aug 18, 2014 at 1:08 PM UTC
I Wish I Knew His Name
I saw a man on the subway today eating a cup of vanilla ice cream but it was no mundane sighting this man looked worn like he'd seen some **** and been through it as well this man sitting across from me on the subway was eating this cup of vanilla ice cream in such a way that it made me think quite a bit about life this man eating a cup of vanilla ice cream was eating it as though it was the first thing he'd ever tasted; he was eating it as though it was the best ice cream he's ever had; he was eating it as though it was the last meal he'd ever eat; all at once this man was eating this cup of vanilla ice cream in such a captivating way I couldn't take my eyes off of him he was careful about it eating slow and steady with each bite he would close his eyes and it almost looked like he smiled as he tasted it each and every time a man sitting across from me on the subway eating a cup of vanilla ice cream when i get to his age I want to look that peaceful and that content despite whatever **** I'll know this man eating a cup of vanilla ice cream made me think about life and i believe it's so beautiful
rrileu
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Aug 18, 2014
Aug 18, 2014 at 1:08 PM UTC
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