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Not much observation is required To recognise that the only thing epic about her is her sadness Which she wears well Like a snug cardigan Severe disregard for life varied with an intense desire to thrive not just survive A tragic paradox Her repetitive nature is aggravating All who have listened have, absorbedly Offered advice which she blatantly declined to take The saga is getting old and tiresome They tell her to see the light, curse the dark, and the shadows that  hover over her They expect their words to make all the difference And she would skip away with a smile and new found appreciation for life and all it has to offer Riddled with guilt She feels accountable for the pain inflicted on others by her actions Harbouring the guilt that eats and never dies Forever harbouring the guilt A desperate "poet" Finding tranquility from linking words To form sentences, a poem To express and create some form of art Seeking ecstasy Through purging of emotions A confused little girl Who is not so little anymore The years are violently adding up Though young The sand through the hour glass is running out Growth of the self stunted by sickness of the mind Ricocheting from the remainder of classic teen-angst to the inevitable adult crash All of the achievements Do not mean anything if she cannot feel it Looking at pictures that hang above the fire place Her teeth indicate she is smiling Her eyes do not Vacant She is not really here She could be anywhere
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Dec 16, 2013
Dec 16, 2013 at 12:13 PM UTC
Son nom est Liliosa
Not much observation is required To recognise that the only thing epic about her is her sadness Which she wears well Like a snug cardigan Severe disregard for life varied with an intense desire to thrive not just survive A tragic paradox Her repetitive nature is aggravating All who have listened have, absorbedly Offered advice which she blatantly declined to take The saga is getting old and tiresome They tell her to see the light, curse the dark, and the shadows that  hover over her They expect their words to make all the difference And she would skip away with a smile and new found appreciation for life and all it has to offer Riddled with guilt She feels accountable for the pain inflicted on others by her actions Harbouring the guilt that eats and never dies Forever harbouring the guilt A desperate "poet" Finding tranquility from linking words To form sentences, a poem To express and create some form of art Seeking ecstasy Through purging of emotions A confused little girl Who is not so little anymore The years are violently adding up Though young The sand through the hour glass is running out Growth of the self stunted by sickness of the mind Ricocheting from the remainder of classic teen-angst to the inevitable adult crash All of the achievements Do not mean anything if she cannot feel it Looking at pictures that hang above the fire place Her teeth indicate she is smiling Her eyes do not Vacant She is not really here She could be anywhere
Not sure about this one.
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Dec 16, 2013
Dec 16, 2013 at 12:13 PM UTC
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