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The setting Sun in the horizon yet slowly readying to dip in deep waters crimson sky with wonderful hallow birds flying fast to their abodes Young boys and girls splashing water Playing throw ball and jumping and tucking under high waves some swimming in the murky sea, their loud laughter filling the beach with joyful abandonment. Grand parents driving in horse carts youngsters riding fast on horse backs Camels with small families on their mounts Guided by their owners with a whip in hand small children building sand castles parents overlooking their activities and clicking photos in mobiles yes, a Sunday evening to beat the heat I sat guarding the baggage of my family Watching all the fun, enjoying the sea breeze, with peanuts in hand, waiting for them to return. Suddenly there were shrieks of people Children running around and people rushing to gather them calling out their dear ones. when rain drops fell on my head and face soaking wet my shoulders with chillness I realized what’s the commotion is all about. The beach wore a special look all of a sudden with a veil of pouring rain … The fading sunset painted the crimson horizon With patches of dark clouds decorating the sky Like big black beads dangling with pearldrops jingling the arena with sounds of joyous music The sudden downpour filled the air with Innumerable smell s- stench of fish water Scents from the crowd, smell from eatable shops Stink of horse, camel dung, dog **** and trash! I gathered the baggage trying to protect them within my arms and covering with my dress running towards a nearby shelter at a shop turning to see if any one rushed to help me But the first rain drops mesmerizing them they forgot me and their belongings Dancing and hugging in the first rain, They were in a joyful world of laughter! ****************************************
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May 5, 2013
May 5, 2013 at 10:28 AM UTC
The first Rain at the Beach... Lakshmy.N
The setting Sun in the horizon yet slowly readying to dip in deep waters crimson sky with wonderful hallow birds flying fast to their abodes Young boys and girls splashing water Playing throw ball and jumping and tucking under high waves some swimming in the murky sea, their loud laughter filling the beach with joyful abandonment. Grand parents driving in horse carts youngsters riding fast on horse backs Camels with small families on their mounts Guided by their owners with a whip in hand small children building sand castles parents overlooking their activities and clicking photos in mobiles yes, a Sunday evening to beat the heat I sat guarding the baggage of my family Watching all the fun, enjoying the sea breeze, with peanuts in hand, waiting for them to return. Suddenly there were shrieks of people Children running around and people rushing to gather them calling out their dear ones. when rain drops fell on my head and face soaking wet my shoulders with chillness I realized what’s the commotion is all about. The beach wore a special look all of a sudden with a veil of pouring rain … The fading sunset painted the crimson horizon With patches of dark clouds decorating the sky Like big black beads dangling with pearldrops jingling the arena with sounds of joyous music The sudden downpour filled the air with Innumerable smell s- stench of fish water Scents from the crowd, smell from eatable shops Stink of horse, camel dung, dog **** and trash! I gathered the baggage trying to protect them within my arms and covering with my dress running towards a nearby shelter at a shop turning to see if any one rushed to help me But the first rain drops mesmerizing them they forgot me and their belongings Dancing and hugging in the first rain, They were in a joyful world of laughter! ****************************************
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May 5, 2013
May 5, 2013 at 10:28 AM UTC
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