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Unexpected happenings cast their shadows far ahead as you notice afterwards looking over your shoulder Miles further on the way you watch the landscape passing and only then you notice what you overlooked before Small signs become signals warning you in retrospect of wrong turns you were taking not noticing what lay ahead A blush on the cheecks a dizzy pressure in the head should have told you to pause the journey for a bit as you have learned in hindsight in gratitude of what went well Eelco van der Waals 20 August 2025
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Aug 24, 2025
Aug 24, 2025 at 5:52 AM UTC
Gratitude
Unexpected happenings cast their shadows far ahead as you notice afterwards looking over your shoulder Miles further on the way you watch the landscape passing and only then you notice what you overlooked before Small signs become signals warning you in retrospect of wrong turns you were taking not noticing what lay ahead A blush on the cheecks a dizzy pressure in the head should have told you to pause the journey for a bit as you have learned in hindsight in gratitude of what went well Eelco van der Waals 20 August 2025
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Aug 24, 2025 at 5:52 AM UTC
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