Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

a note's birth

the high G# was born on a Sunday morning.

It came out a little early, (whoops)

but it's mother,

a soprano, standing much too short and singing much too high,

always held the philosophy better early than late.

which worked quite well with appointments

 

but like the birth of a child

the birth of a note is a ****** messy thing.

even the mother looks on at in disgust

the audience does not look at all.

 

it strains against the folds of her throat,

while she squints at the little dots fitted in between lines.

(notes laced into the pages of music,

like slightly old whisky into watered down punch)

the choir director arms circle wildly,

motioning:"breathe, breathe"

 

Finally it breaks through,

cracking,

whipping

out of her mouth--

a sharp cry.

 

 

Through her trembling lips and chin she smiles,

victorious

it is alive.

 

the note's heart beats,

once, twice, three times, and after the fourth,

it dies.

Request permission to use this poem
s
Written by
sr-devaste
Published
Mar 3, 2010
Lines·Words
27·157
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell sr-devaste how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write