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You are a pair of shoes. It was love at first sight. I wanted you. I needed you. I got you. You fit perfect. You looked perfect. You were perfect. A little while went by, And I was breaking you in. You were so comfortable. But then you started to wear out. You hurt me when i walked. I couldn't be near you. I need to let you go. It was hard, But it needed to be done. Goodbye.
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May 2, 2015
May 2, 2015 at 12:35 AM UTC
Shoe Love
You are a pair of shoes. It was love at first sight. I wanted you. I needed you. I got you. You fit perfect. You looked perfect. You were perfect. A little while went by, And I was breaking you in. You were so comfortable. But then you started to wear out. You hurt me when i walked. I couldn't be near you. I need to let you go. It was hard, But it needed to be done. Goodbye.
this is a metaphor about a relationship being compared to a pair of shoes
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May 2, 2015
May 2, 2015 at 12:35 AM UTC
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