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You think Too Much – The comments fly, sting, punch, bite. As if you are always Worse than you are – You are Fine – Fine? What defines Fine? Average, the usual – The arrow’s slow trek around the clock, unblinking, relentless. Endless. Too Much? The water is rising just over the rim, peeking at me, daring me to spill over.
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Feb 4, 2015
Feb 4, 2015 at 4:52 PM UTC
You think
You think Too Much – The comments fly, sting, punch, bite. As if you are always Worse than you are – You are Fine – Fine? What defines Fine? Average, the usual – The arrow’s slow trek around the clock, unblinking, relentless. Endless. Too Much? The water is rising just over the rim, peeking at me, daring me to spill over.
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Feb 4, 2015
Feb 4, 2015 at 4:52 PM UTC
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