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In spring the birds converged upon a tree, filling, brimming, bustling, with tiny jaunty jovial bodies, and wings, legs, beaks, and eyes all peered onto the world from skies so high, so high the giant tree, that blocked the sun and forged the wind and forged the rain and forged the clouds and forged the shade and forged the dirt and forged the grass and forged the snow and they amassed, branch by branch, limb by limb, stick by stick, twig by twig. Pygmy bantams leapt, hopped, skipped, popped, grew in volume enormously until the tree, being just a tree, only a tree, could only hold so much and when they amassed branch by branch, limb by limb, stick by stick, twig by twig, it happened to crack break, dissolve, fall, and die into hard ground under weight of flightless little bodies.
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May 14, 2010
May 14, 2010 at 11:11 AM UTC
Birthing Tree
In spring the birds converged upon a tree, filling, brimming, bustling, with tiny jaunty jovial bodies, and wings, legs, beaks, and eyes all peered onto the world from skies so high, so high the giant tree, that blocked the sun and forged the wind and forged the rain and forged the clouds and forged the shade and forged the dirt and forged the grass and forged the snow and they amassed, branch by branch, limb by limb, stick by stick, twig by twig. Pygmy bantams leapt, hopped, skipped, popped, grew in volume enormously until the tree, being just a tree, only a tree, could only hold so much and when they amassed branch by branch, limb by limb, stick by stick, twig by twig, it happened to crack break, dissolve, fall, and die into hard ground under weight of flightless little bodies.
Please react and revise, it's got direction but I feel it's broad.
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May 14, 2010
May 14, 2010 at 11:11 AM UTC
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