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The Commute, Part One

There are ten of us-

Make that eleven-

Barreling down the highway at highway speeds;

two elderly thai women,

a middle aged man

with some sort of mental disability

his eyes hunting, hungrily for someone to listen to him,

three old men in the back

talking about cars, women and building houses

(while riding the bus on their own in old ripped clothing)

and the strange mix from my stop;

two women no older than my mother

that look older than my grandma

from an obvious history of hard drugs,

and elderly grandma-type woman

who could be a therapist,

engaged as she is in reading some sort of case study.

 

The driver keeps an engaged, concentrated look on his face

as we zip through sunlit countryside

that I have never seen this way.

It's only 9 AM

and I'm listening to Counting Crows, Sugar Ray and The Goo Goo Dolls.

 

The women who are older than they should be

get off at the casino.

 

The man with the disabilities clenches his seat

as we pass the," entering Sequim," sign.

The Thai women put their purses on their shoulders here

and I take my headphones off,

wrap the cord around them and put them away.

 

Two of the men in back are still talking,

the third has fallen asleep,

his head against the wall,

mouth pointed toward the ceiling.

 

The grandmotherly woman gets off at the co-op

the rest of us disembark at the bus station and go our separate ways.

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Jul 15, 2013
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