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Unfocused I believe in you But not what you do Let's slow down before you try something new Just a little work, Just a little concentration, Then you can clamber over the foot-hills of imagination And yes, write your notes Put them out to float Watch them drift and shift Until you can fit your fingers in that rift And pick them apart Like you didn't expect them to sound so harsh But still, you're writing your reflection, In some semblance of introspection. Half hopeful, half ashamed, Your potential remains framed Against always-the-same problems, renamed. Now, come, stare at your success. Hunt its blemishes locked in the recesses of your mind And find you've run out of time at second best. So, rewind and repeat to your own excess: I'm fine. This pattern is mine.
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Jan 20, 2020
Jan 20, 2020 at 4:36 PM UTC
Unfocused
Unfocused I believe in you But not what you do Let's slow down before you try something new Just a little work, Just a little concentration, Then you can clamber over the foot-hills of imagination And yes, write your notes Put them out to float Watch them drift and shift Until you can fit your fingers in that rift And pick them apart Like you didn't expect them to sound so harsh But still, you're writing your reflection, In some semblance of introspection. Half hopeful, half ashamed, Your potential remains framed Against always-the-same problems, renamed. Now, come, stare at your success. Hunt its blemishes locked in the recesses of your mind And find you've run out of time at second best. So, rewind and repeat to your own excess: I'm fine. This pattern is mine.
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Jan 20, 2020
Jan 20, 2020 at 4:36 PM UTC
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