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Air gets dragged painfully through my throat as my body spasms from my violent coughs. Now my throat is constricted and my airways are inflamed, there is hardly any room for the oxygen to get through. It's like breathing through a straw, except there are little tiny knives inside of it that dig into my airways as I inhale and it hurts it hurts so badly. Then I feel it in my chest as my lungs fill up with oxygen they expand and this pain spreads like cold fire burning me with each breath and then leaving this icy feeling behind. Then as I start to exhale the fire burns stronger and my heart is pounding and my throat is closing and the world starts to spin, then the air finally leaves my body and I can relax. Until I have to breathe in again, and this cycle starts all over.
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Jan 29, 2015
Jan 29, 2015 at 2:00 PM UTC
Breathing
Air gets dragged painfully through my throat as my body spasms from my violent coughs. Now my throat is constricted and my airways are inflamed, there is hardly any room for the oxygen to get through. It's like breathing through a straw, except there are little tiny knives inside of it that dig into my airways as I inhale and it hurts it hurts so badly. Then I feel it in my chest as my lungs fill up with oxygen they expand and this pain spreads like cold fire burning me with each breath and then leaving this icy feeling behind. Then as I start to exhale the fire burns stronger and my heart is pounding and my throat is closing and the world starts to spin, then the air finally leaves my body and I can relax. Until I have to breathe in again, and this cycle starts all over.
I'm okay, I am just kind of really sick though.
tatiana
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27/F/American
Jan 29, 2015
Jan 29, 2015 at 2:00 PM UTC
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