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*Your LOVE It wets my eyes It jumps up my goose flesh It leaves me silent for days, Now months... Unfettered In a state of vast Deep dark blank space Like watching the night sky! Doesn't matter What realization has dawn Upon us Whether it was right or not Doesn't matter My LOVE for you Is now beyond the hour of reconciliation And objective / subjective analysis .. Our LOVE has happened It was transpired by fate what needs its commendation Is our self assessment .. We will know There can / will never be Another better substitute Than My LOVE for you And Your LOVE for me... Ah So our heart says!*
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Jun 16, 2015
Jun 16, 2015 at 11:47 PM UTC
Another Better Substitute... Than LOVE?
*Your LOVE It wets my eyes It jumps up my goose flesh It leaves me silent for days, Now months... Unfettered In a state of vast Deep dark blank space Like watching the night sky! Doesn't matter What realization has dawn Upon us Whether it was right or not Doesn't matter My LOVE for you Is now beyond the hour of reconciliation And objective / subjective analysis .. Our LOVE has happened It was transpired by fate what needs its commendation Is our self assessment .. We will know There can / will never be Another better substitute Than My LOVE for you And Your LOVE for me... Ah So our heart says!*
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Jun 16, 2015
Jun 16, 2015 at 11:47 PM UTC
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