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Yesterday I wondered if I were living someone else's life. The eggs were not what I ordered. The bus was heading the wrong way. My clothes didn’t fit as they should, more creases and bulges than I knew. In the mirror, that person didn’t even notice the button undone — which I would have, had I been there. I would have un-undone it. At work I was wondering what I was doing, like an intern. Only I’ve been there eight years. For a time I was an observer, a witness to one human figure moving through the world holding himself small, like he was trying to leave no trace but fading footprints. And I wonder if this soul, moving with unseen force, is the real me? My mother would talk about grieving in terms of fog, or smoke: surroundings obscured and reduced to a visceral myopia. Until one day the veil lifts and you say to yourself, “Oh! Now I see. I was asleep the whole time.” Then I imagine the child, the adolescent, the adult, the loner, the misfit, the connections, the work, the struggle, the challenge, the belonging, the realisation, the longing. and I wondered whether I should awake from the feeling of living someone else’s life, or whether I have been awake the whole time. and what a tragedy it would be to grieve for that which has not yet gone. And if I can figure myself to be some other, can I not imagine myself complete?
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Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 3:00 PM UTC
Someone Else
Yesterday I wondered if I were living someone else's life. The eggs were not what I ordered. The bus was heading the wrong way. My clothes didn’t fit as they should, more creases and bulges than I knew. In the mirror, that person didn’t even notice the button undone — which I would have, had I been there. I would have un-undone it. At work I was wondering what I was doing, like an intern. Only I’ve been there eight years. For a time I was an observer, a witness to one human figure moving through the world holding himself small, like he was trying to leave no trace but fading footprints. And I wonder if this soul, moving with unseen force, is the real me? My mother would talk about grieving in terms of fog, or smoke: surroundings obscured and reduced to a visceral myopia. Until one day the veil lifts and you say to yourself, “Oh! Now I see. I was asleep the whole time.” Then I imagine the child, the adolescent, the adult, the loner, the misfit, the connections, the work, the struggle, the challenge, the belonging, the realisation, the longing. and I wondered whether I should awake from the feeling of living someone else’s life, or whether I have been awake the whole time. and what a tragedy it would be to grieve for that which has not yet gone. And if I can figure myself to be some other, can I not imagine myself complete?
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60/Sydney
Dec 20, 2025
Dec 20, 2025 at 3:00 PM UTC
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