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christianity is, in part,                                ontologically based, to behave like hinduism...                  in that its root is a polytheism, focusing on                             the opposite of a theology,   or its particularness...                    it's poly-schismatic. catholicism can lie all it wants away, but the fact is simple:   christianity was based upon a focus of an impeding schism...    so i can't see a way out of shouting:        shotgun!               as you rarely do, take the seat in a non-black-cabbie next to the driver... since there isn't one...                   add to it an innumerable cohort of saints... and you're done... at least islam is "schizophrenic", in that the schism took to representing two factions of belief systems...     me? if i were muslim?                  shi'a(h) islam... all the way... christianity just has a messiah complex imbedded in it... and therefore it has so many splinters (schisms) waiting for it, to be reduced to.                orthodox, catholic, protestant, and then all the -isms... luthernism, calvinism, baptism -ism- -ists...    em, second day adventists?             it's like darwinism in a theological sense: look! look at all the theo-diversity!      only now, would you associate the (g)nostic movement in islam (sufism) with shi'a(h) islam... but come on! how can you make poetry      a capitalist "thing"?      you can't compete when writing poetry... you can't compete on an universal basis for a uniform stance of "incompetent" expression...    that **** ain't happening...       i feel with my intensity, and with my intensity alone... you can't compete with what you feel, and then scribble down...        the **** is this "comprehension" / realisation? poetry is not some potato-sack / egg on a spoon race!   in terms of language...      english has already won the culture war...   but chinese, or hindi, as written in sanskrit?    well... that's won the existential war...    a billion here... and a billion over there...        mind you, i'll repeat myself... the polytheistic aspect of christianity is that christianity has a tendency to agitate schisms; it's really a religion of the obelus (÷), or as some might suggest: the obelisk of washington d.c. thank **** it wasn't a giant **** of masonry, with only one / two rooms in it. the ****** religion just implodes,    and schizophrenics itself into a poly-diadem that then tries to resolve some primitive geometric form (square, triangle, a straight line, a dot)    of "respectability"; but reducing the tetragrammaton (yhwh) into a dangling piece of metal, i.e. a † (crux)? that! that's truly barbaric!
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May 20, 2017
May 20, 2017 at 10:46 AM UTC
the polytheistic aspect of christianity (schisms)
christianity is, in part,                                ontologically based, to behave like hinduism...                  in that its root is a polytheism, focusing on                             the opposite of a theology,   or its particularness...                    it's poly-schismatic. catholicism can lie all it wants away, but the fact is simple:   christianity was based upon a focus of an impeding schism...    so i can't see a way out of shouting:        shotgun!               as you rarely do, take the seat in a non-black-cabbie next to the driver... since there isn't one...                   add to it an innumerable cohort of saints... and you're done... at least islam is "schizophrenic", in that the schism took to representing two factions of belief systems...     me? if i were muslim?                  shi'a(h) islam... all the way... christianity just has a messiah complex imbedded in it... and therefore it has so many splinters (schisms) waiting for it, to be reduced to.                orthodox, catholic, protestant, and then all the -isms... luthernism, calvinism, baptism -ism- -ists...    em, second day adventists?             it's like darwinism in a theological sense: look! look at all the theo-diversity!      only now, would you associate the (g)nostic movement in islam (sufism) with shi'a(h) islam... but come on! how can you make poetry      a capitalist "thing"?      you can't compete when writing poetry... you can't compete on an universal basis for a uniform stance of "incompetent" expression...    that **** ain't happening...       i feel with my intensity, and with my intensity alone... you can't compete with what you feel, and then scribble down...        the **** is this "comprehension" / realisation? poetry is not some potato-sack / egg on a spoon race!   in terms of language...      english has already won the culture war...   but chinese, or hindi, as written in sanskrit?    well... that's won the existential war...    a billion here... and a billion over there...        mind you, i'll repeat myself... the polytheistic aspect of christianity is that christianity has a tendency to agitate schisms; it's really a religion of the obelus (÷), or as some might suggest: the obelisk of washington d.c. thank **** it wasn't a giant **** of masonry, with only one / two rooms in it. the ****** religion just implodes,    and schizophrenics itself into a poly-diadem that then tries to resolve some primitive geometric form (square, triangle, a straight line, a dot)    of "respectability"; but reducing the tetragrammaton (yhwh) into a dangling piece of metal, i.e. a † (crux)? that! that's truly barbaric!
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May 20, 2017
May 20, 2017 at 10:46 AM UTC
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