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The Hands of My Mother by JCaraballo When my mother’s hands trembled, the steel within my soul fractured into irreparable shards. I was absent, feeling estranged from the light that gently welcomed me into this world, a fragile leaf slowly withering in barren, silent earth, without a breeze to carry it upward. A shadow that drags itself through the fading light, fleeing the night that consumes all, with sharp teeth of unyielding remorse that bite ceaselessly. I am pain without forgiveness, an echo of what I ought to have been. But I was not.
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Oct 15, 2025
Oct 15, 2025 at 11:43 PM UTC
The hands of my mother
The Hands of My Mother by JCaraballo When my mother’s hands trembled, the steel within my soul fractured into irreparable shards. I was absent, feeling estranged from the light that gently welcomed me into this world, a fragile leaf slowly withering in barren, silent earth, without a breeze to carry it upward. A shadow that drags itself through the fading light, fleeing the night that consumes all, with sharp teeth of unyielding remorse that bite ceaselessly. I am pain without forgiveness, an echo of what I ought to have been. But I was not.
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Oct 15, 2025
Oct 15, 2025 at 11:43 PM UTC
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