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I've never felt as fragile as I do in this very moment. The pillars that make up the foundation of my being has been thoroughly broken. Reminders of our days haunt my every step and it's been so long since I've seen your face and I guess I was naive to think I'd forget. Your love was so intense it burned my heart and left a hole that has shown to be difficult to fill. Not by the cheap thrill of a one-night stand nor the sweet intoxication of countless bottles and cans. It can't be filled by even half a percentage when writing a poem or a song, though, all I sing and write of is you, of the days we shared I wish would have lasted for just a little longer than the days without you would. For every second I shared with you was a second I cherished.
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May 4, 2015
May 4, 2015 at 5:46 PM UTC
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I've never felt as fragile as I do in this very moment. The pillars that make up the foundation of my being has been thoroughly broken. Reminders of our days haunt my every step and it's been so long since I've seen your face and I guess I was naive to think I'd forget. Your love was so intense it burned my heart and left a hole that has shown to be difficult to fill. Not by the cheap thrill of a one-night stand nor the sweet intoxication of countless bottles and cans. It can't be filled by even half a percentage when writing a poem or a song, though, all I sing and write of is you, of the days we shared I wish would have lasted for just a little longer than the days without you would. For every second I shared with you was a second I cherished.
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May 4, 2015
May 4, 2015 at 5:46 PM UTC
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