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The sabers rattle sending the torn flesh messages of the Great Old Ones. No more apologies or options for your angst. Those particular doors have closed. Acceptance of your mindless discontent, your dissatisfaction with what is barely adversarial, or at worst inconvenient has been deemed unsafe. Safety, at this point, Is not a concern. Those hollows have been filled; The floodgates closed, That river ****** This space is unsafe for your need for a safe space. (This Space for Rent) Wanton want, need, greed, have no elbow room here. This space is taken. The fist you find will knuckle the small of your spine and smile. *** -JBClaywell © P&ZPublications
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Nov 24, 2016
Nov 24, 2016 at 1:33 PM UTC
Speaking for the dead. (bombed hospitals/fallen homes/buried children)
The sabers rattle sending the torn flesh messages of the Great Old Ones. No more apologies or options for your angst. Those particular doors have closed. Acceptance of your mindless discontent, your dissatisfaction with what is barely adversarial, or at worst inconvenient has been deemed unsafe. Safety, at this point, Is not a concern. Those hollows have been filled; The floodgates closed, That river ****** This space is unsafe for your need for a safe space. (This Space for Rent) Wanton want, need, greed, have no elbow room here. This space is taken. The fist you find will knuckle the small of your spine and smile. *** -JBClaywell © P&ZPublications
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Nov 24, 2016
Nov 24, 2016 at 1:33 PM UTC
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