Eye Balling
I felt your eyes ******* my poems
You took away the Island flavor
Enjoining adjectives, nouns and pronouns
Only blends like a raw smoothie,
However, without crush ice, it's bland
Let’s be blunt nothing beats originality in poetry
Poems demand originality not mind ****
Aug 28, 2014
Aug 28, 2014 at 6:18 PM UTC
Eye Balling
I felt your eyes ******* my poems
You took away the Island flavor
Enjoining adjectives, nouns and pronouns
Only blends like a raw smoothie,
However, without crush ice, it's bland
Let’s be blunt nothing beats originality in poetry
Poems demand originality not mind ****
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