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The narrow country lane with high hedgerows with whistling birds and the far off sound of a tractor in a field. Benny walked close to the edge in case vehicles came along. He was going to meet Jane by the lane to the church. He'd just helped get the cows in from the fields and helped weigh the milk. He passed two cottages on his left where a boy lived who said he didn't like Londoners and Benny said tough luck and now the boy didn't speak but gave him black looks. The tractor stopped the field was quiet birds flew from hedgerows in the distance. He saw Jane waiting for him dressed in a cotton flowered dress and her black hair tied in two bunches. She smiled when she saw him and his heart thumped harder as he came close. A feast for his eyes her beautiful figure and face. The tractor began again the sound coming across the field and hedgerows which stood upright like soldiers in rows.
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Feb 12, 2017
Feb 12, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
SUMMER DAY MEETING 1961.
The narrow country lane with high hedgerows with whistling birds and the far off sound of a tractor in a field. Benny walked close to the edge in case vehicles came along. He was going to meet Jane by the lane to the church. He'd just helped get the cows in from the fields and helped weigh the milk. He passed two cottages on his left where a boy lived who said he didn't like Londoners and Benny said tough luck and now the boy didn't speak but gave him black looks. The tractor stopped the field was quiet birds flew from hedgerows in the distance. He saw Jane waiting for him dressed in a cotton flowered dress and her black hair tied in two bunches. She smiled when she saw him and his heart thumped harder as he came close. A feast for his eyes her beautiful figure and face. The tractor began again the sound coming across the field and hedgerows which stood upright like soldiers in rows.
A BOY MEETS A GIRL IN A COUNTRY LANE IN 1961
TerryCollett
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Feb 12, 2017
Feb 12, 2017 at 8:45 AM UTC
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