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Under the unremitting clarity of a summer sky they met, one last time, to say goodbye. She, stiff and puckered as a frozen prune, could barely force a smile, a thin rictus across the swollen softness of her face, like the blackened lightening **** down the pine she stood beside. He put his right hand on the trunk, leaning in to look her in the eyes, his shaven head bending into shadow, his newly-minted uniform crinkling into place: “It’s only a year,” he said; “the war’s almost over. I’ll be back before you know it. We’ll have the biggest wedding this town has ever seen!” His shining smile beguiled her, as it always had. Her mouth unfroze, a salty tear prickling on her tongue: “Don’t you go and get yourself killed,” she said; “I can’t raise junior on my own.” She patted her yet unswollen belly with her right hand, placing her left on his bending face. “Don’t let Curtis lead you on; he’s crazy. You’ll die there.” At that he laughed, a solid, good-natured sound, as he drew back his head and grabbed her hand in his. “I’ll be careful,” he said. “We can Skype every night. I’ll be with you every day.” He paused, looking up at the cone poised above his head. “I’ll be able to go to college; I can work; we’ll live with Mom; you’ll see; it’ll be fine.” “We’ll live with MY mom,” she said, smiling up at him. He laughed again, putting his arms round her shoulders, pulling her close, bending down for one last kiss: A cloud obscured the sun, throwing them in shadow, as he whispered “I’ll be back. I love you so.” He straightened, gave a salute, turned precisely, and headed to the bus. Under the unremitting clarity of a summer sky they said goodbye, she— to have and raise a son, he—to die.
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Jul 8, 2016
Jul 8, 2016 at 2:01 PM UTC
The Parting
Under the unremitting clarity of a summer sky they met, one last time, to say goodbye. She, stiff and puckered as a frozen prune, could barely force a smile, a thin rictus across the swollen softness of her face, like the blackened lightening **** down the pine she stood beside. He put his right hand on the trunk, leaning in to look her in the eyes, his shaven head bending into shadow, his newly-minted uniform crinkling into place: “It’s only a year,” he said; “the war’s almost over. I’ll be back before you know it. We’ll have the biggest wedding this town has ever seen!” His shining smile beguiled her, as it always had. Her mouth unfroze, a salty tear prickling on her tongue: “Don’t you go and get yourself killed,” she said; “I can’t raise junior on my own.” She patted her yet unswollen belly with her right hand, placing her left on his bending face. “Don’t let Curtis lead you on; he’s crazy. You’ll die there.” At that he laughed, a solid, good-natured sound, as he drew back his head and grabbed her hand in his. “I’ll be careful,” he said. “We can Skype every night. I’ll be with you every day.” He paused, looking up at the cone poised above his head. “I’ll be able to go to college; I can work; we’ll live with Mom; you’ll see; it’ll be fine.” “We’ll live with MY mom,” she said, smiling up at him. He laughed again, putting his arms round her shoulders, pulling her close, bending down for one last kiss: A cloud obscured the sun, throwing them in shadow, as he whispered “I’ll be back. I love you so.” He straightened, gave a salute, turned precisely, and headed to the bus. Under the unremitting clarity of a summer sky they said goodbye, she— to have and raise a son, he—to die.
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Jul 8, 2016
Jul 8, 2016 at 2:01 PM UTC
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