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Brownout A not too loud explosion pierced the quiet hours ..................immediately after......lights went out Twelve midnight, and two minutes later there gently blew, a whiff of cool air, brushed past my cheeks and shoulders but...that was it Every hot, humid second of every burning minute took too long to get out of my sweating body the heat seemed stationary in the stillness of this limited territory Lukewarm water flowed out of the shower being wet.......was brief it didn't bring much relief It was cooler....out at the verandah but mosquitoes are more active in the dark the flickering candlelight teased them all the more, this moonless night This should be a good time to ponder........to write but my head feels limited...empty swelling with something else, that is chilly this silent.........uptight uncomfortable summer night ...the hours, consumed with blight a disappointment outright... just waiting....for my eyes to give in no longer defying, but surrendering, to the hot...humid dark wee hours of the morning. Sally Copyright May 12, 2016 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
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May 11, 2016
May 11, 2016 at 10:58 PM UTC
BROWNOUT
Brownout A not too loud explosion pierced the quiet hours ..................immediately after......lights went out Twelve midnight, and two minutes later there gently blew, a whiff of cool air, brushed past my cheeks and shoulders but...that was it Every hot, humid second of every burning minute took too long to get out of my sweating body the heat seemed stationary in the stillness of this limited territory Lukewarm water flowed out of the shower being wet.......was brief it didn't bring much relief It was cooler....out at the verandah but mosquitoes are more active in the dark the flickering candlelight teased them all the more, this moonless night This should be a good time to ponder........to write but my head feels limited...empty swelling with something else, that is chilly this silent.........uptight uncomfortable summer night ...the hours, consumed with blight a disappointment outright... just waiting....for my eyes to give in no longer defying, but surrendering, to the hot...humid dark wee hours of the morning. Sally Copyright May 12, 2016 Rosalia Rosario A. Bayan
...either too dark , or too bright...makes us, weary...
sally-a-bayan
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F/Filipino
May 11, 2016
May 11, 2016 at 10:58 PM UTC
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