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Today was thick and warm, swelling like a marshmallow held over our summer campfire. We slipped down the narrow, curving creek, a run-on sentence near the page's waist in the book you left lying open, face down, on the night table. The banks yawned up over our heads, and sunflowers lined the cusp of the ridge watching us, a silent yellow audience of earth bound stars. The paddle breaking the surface of the water was the only sound, amplified by the miniature valley we were conversing with.
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Apr 26, 2011
Apr 26, 2011 at 7:40 PM UTC
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Today was thick and warm, swelling like a marshmallow held over our summer campfire. We slipped down the narrow, curving creek, a run-on sentence near the page's waist in the book you left lying open, face down, on the night table. The banks yawned up over our heads, and sunflowers lined the cusp of the ridge watching us, a silent yellow audience of earth bound stars. The paddle breaking the surface of the water was the only sound, amplified by the miniature valley we were conversing with.
dylan-james
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Apr 26, 2011
Apr 26, 2011 at 7:40 PM UTC
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