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I went to a gun range once With 6 men I had never fired a gun before 2 were helping me While the other men Were handing me guns to try One rifle knocked me to the ground Left a dark bruise On my shoulder The men laughed The handgun I preferred Kept getting jammed I wonder now if I was firing too fast It jammed for the last time And…. I turned to Kent and Jim With the gun pointed up Close to my ear My finger still on the trigger It fired again Cutting through My hair The bullet Cut a path Through the canopy overhead Kent ****** my hand down While he removed the gun Dead silence Then everyone yelled at once
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Dec 13, 2025
Dec 13, 2025 at 11:46 AM UTC
The Gun Range
I went to a gun range once With 6 men I had never fired a gun before 2 were helping me While the other men Were handing me guns to try One rifle knocked me to the ground Left a dark bruise On my shoulder The men laughed The handgun I preferred Kept getting jammed I wonder now if I was firing too fast It jammed for the last time And…. I turned to Kent and Jim With the gun pointed up Close to my ear My finger still on the trigger It fired again Cutting through My hair The bullet Cut a path Through the canopy overhead Kent ****** my hand down While he removed the gun Dead silence Then everyone yelled at once
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Dec 13, 2025
Dec 13, 2025 at 11:46 AM UTC
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