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Yup, that's right. Don't be offended or upset. It's very environmental, recycling words. True, the quality of literacy, (have mercy on it!) is getting quite strained (not-so-good poems *droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven*). Certain words are grumbling, talking, overworked and overuse, in poems that say nothing new (they got their pride too!). Rumors of unionizing going around, increasing the minimum wage to a passing grade, and something like a penny a letter, and double for words, not of the English language... The ringleader I'm told is the word itself Words tired from being in 59,649 poems (plus 1 now) *Death, heartbreak and depression, scars, cutting and sad,* the most overwrought ones, the children's beloved, their never-ending plastic ones trending, under the weight collapsing of boring and from the pressure of overuse, bending. The words have brought the unrisen, alabaster body of poor dead (oops) Love (137,207 + 1) as evidence of this too long a verbal season of victory. Make no mistake, among the guilty we be, our sweet tooth for these miscreants, documented in black and white, resting uncomfortably, among our total of 171,500 words we've purportedly recorded and employed. The Writer's Guild, all a titters, arms, up and akimbo, the cries of poetry poverty among the living thundering, no longer suffering silently, ere the mendicancies cries from Ye Olde York emanating, seeking contributions and donations, minimum on PayPal,, one whole dollar! Well I have paid my dues, much more than one and much more than once, would so again, annually, as I could no more surcease this gig, for where to find another profession that pays so handsomely? Let it not go unnoticed like so many poems left footed born, themselves, unread, unnoticed, that the ever increasing number of Poets is a good thing for the universe. So many new humans each day, from the black forest of daily life's lessons emerge choosing poetry to conquer life's ailments. For they bravely having taking the *road less traveled by, and that has made all the difference,*       and the world, a better place for it...
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Apr 26, 2014
Apr 26, 2014 at 4:49 PM UTC
Too many poems here
Yup, that's right. Don't be offended or upset. It's very environmental, recycling words. True, the quality of literacy, (have mercy on it!) is getting quite strained (not-so-good poems *droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven*). Certain words are grumbling, talking, overworked and overuse, in poems that say nothing new (they got their pride too!). Rumors of unionizing going around, increasing the minimum wage to a passing grade, and something like a penny a letter, and double for words, not of the English language... The ringleader I'm told is the word itself Words tired from being in 59,649 poems (plus 1 now) *Death, heartbreak and depression, scars, cutting and sad,* the most overwrought ones, the children's beloved, their never-ending plastic ones trending, under the weight collapsing of boring and from the pressure of overuse, bending. The words have brought the unrisen, alabaster body of poor dead (oops) Love (137,207 + 1) as evidence of this too long a verbal season of victory. Make no mistake, among the guilty we be, our sweet tooth for these miscreants, documented in black and white, resting uncomfortably, among our total of 171,500 words we've purportedly recorded and employed. The Writer's Guild, all a titters, arms, up and akimbo, the cries of poetry poverty among the living thundering, no longer suffering silently, ere the mendicancies cries from Ye Olde York emanating, seeking contributions and donations, minimum on PayPal,, one whole dollar! Well I have paid my dues, much more than one and much more than once, would so again, annually, as I could no more surcease this gig, for where to find another profession that pays so handsomely? Let it not go unnoticed like so many poems left footed born, themselves, unread, unnoticed, that the ever increasing number of Poets is a good thing for the universe. So many new humans each day, from the black forest of daily life's lessons emerge choosing poetry to conquer life's ailments. For they bravely having taking the *road less traveled by, and that has made all the difference,*       and the world, a better place for it...
A number of themes...too many new poems, tired when born, from overworked themes...personal rants, make bad poetry, please stop...use new words (not obscure) to inspire new topics, new insights...but the idea that so many turn to writing as a creative outlet, gladdens the heart and makes for better human beings...
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Apr 26, 2014
Apr 26, 2014 at 4:49 PM UTC
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