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you're the cream of the crop. mom and dad are proud of you. this is the day you've been waiting for. i don't claim to understand you, but i can't honestly say i'd like to. the blue gown that means so much to everyone around you whispers of the things you gave up, the opportunities you've missed, to be here today. the whispering cloak falls victim to the applause that breaks out as you claim your place at the podium top of the class. you've worked hard. there's no doubting that. you're a multi-faceted gem of talent and intellect. which in reality is subservience and obedience. i don't doubt that had you not urinated on your passion i might have respected you some day. but honestly. i'm happy for you. the diploma will look stunning on your wall next to all of your other shining achievements along with your jarred "talents" and canned pleasantries
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Jul 3, 2010
Jul 3, 2010 at 2:19 AM UTC
Disgusting
you're the cream of the crop. mom and dad are proud of you. this is the day you've been waiting for. i don't claim to understand you, but i can't honestly say i'd like to. the blue gown that means so much to everyone around you whispers of the things you gave up, the opportunities you've missed, to be here today. the whispering cloak falls victim to the applause that breaks out as you claim your place at the podium top of the class. you've worked hard. there's no doubting that. you're a multi-faceted gem of talent and intellect. which in reality is subservience and obedience. i don't doubt that had you not urinated on your passion i might have respected you some day. but honestly. i'm happy for you. the diploma will look stunning on your wall next to all of your other shining achievements along with your jarred "talents" and canned pleasantries
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Jul 3, 2010
Jul 3, 2010 at 2:19 AM UTC
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