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~weary weighted~ flummoxed are the sea watchers; the long rhythms of sea change reveal only minor modesties, difficult discerned are the tidal subtleties though repetitive thrashing extracts it toll, only the weary-weighted see the true meaning of the beating, knowing full well, it beats for them recalling their early day’d fascination with its endless chaining, now knowing all are similar detained-chained, and  the ******* churning but a cover up masque, they need not longer conceal, an unrevealed confess: water is heavy-weighted, you cannot forever float, constancy is of a thing to be wary, its sadder longevity, a chipping away erosion of wearing, *‘tis is the knelling noise of  sad respite, an unlight lighthouse* ~for Victoria, a year later~
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Jul 29, 2018
Jul 29, 2018 at 3:21 PM UTC
weary weighted
~weary weighted~ flummoxed are the sea watchers; the long rhythms of sea change reveal only minor modesties, difficult discerned are the tidal subtleties though repetitive thrashing extracts it toll, only the weary-weighted see the true meaning of the beating, knowing full well, it beats for them recalling their early day’d fascination with its endless chaining, now knowing all are similar detained-chained, and  the ******* churning but a cover up masque, they need not longer conceal, an unrevealed confess: water is heavy-weighted, you cannot forever float, constancy is of a thing to be wary, its sadder longevity, a chipping away erosion of wearing, *‘tis is the knelling noise of  sad respite, an unlight lighthouse* ~for Victoria, a year later~
inspired by https://hellopoetry.com/poem/2041120/tides-and-the-teenagers/
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Jul 29, 2018
Jul 29, 2018 at 3:21 PM UTC
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