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I walked as part of a caravan That followed a well known road Which circled around a tall mountain Before the nearest village showed. And I said – "Look, my friends, I from here spot a crevice, The mountain has a narrow tunnel But for men it may suffice." They laughed at me aloud and said "Friend – Don’t talk insane, If there sure was a tunnel, Would we circle around in vain?" But I insisted we explored The dark jungles with a few men So we could walk shorter And may have some time to gain. My words fell on deaf ears And they left me all alone They said if I wanted to know I could go on my own. I did then branch away And walked through the thick wood Soon I reached the mountain base And my spirits were good As I entered a small tunnel And reached its middle at once I saw ahead the neighboring town At close walking distance. Glad I was to see the tunnel Was large enough for ten fellows It could pass my men easily And save their walking woes. Said I to myself happily "I knew there was another way! It is now time to share the news Without any delay!" But suddenly it began to rain And dark became the sky The light at the tunnel’s end Dimmed slowly before it died. I saw the storm wash away The woods and the trees Soon flooded became the tunnel and mountain walls squeezed. I saw no light, I knew no better Than to hope for a miracle Until a fatal burst of wave In not time had me gobbled. I saw from above my caravan friends Thought I was safe in my tunnel shade Until they heard no more of me And believed I got strayed. They forget me soon after And took the same known road Every time the passed the tunnel But to explore they never slowed. It hurts me not that I met my fate Alone and untimely a lot But I am sad that the mountain tunnel Is yet to cross another thought.
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Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 6:31 AM UTC
The Mountain Tunnel
I walked as part of a caravan That followed a well known road Which circled around a tall mountain Before the nearest village showed. And I said – "Look, my friends, I from here spot a crevice, The mountain has a narrow tunnel But for men it may suffice." They laughed at me aloud and said "Friend – Don’t talk insane, If there sure was a tunnel, Would we circle around in vain?" But I insisted we explored The dark jungles with a few men So we could walk shorter And may have some time to gain. My words fell on deaf ears And they left me all alone They said if I wanted to know I could go on my own. I did then branch away And walked through the thick wood Soon I reached the mountain base And my spirits were good As I entered a small tunnel And reached its middle at once I saw ahead the neighboring town At close walking distance. Glad I was to see the tunnel Was large enough for ten fellows It could pass my men easily And save their walking woes. Said I to myself happily "I knew there was another way! It is now time to share the news Without any delay!" But suddenly it began to rain And dark became the sky The light at the tunnel’s end Dimmed slowly before it died. I saw the storm wash away The woods and the trees Soon flooded became the tunnel and mountain walls squeezed. I saw no light, I knew no better Than to hope for a miracle Until a fatal burst of wave In not time had me gobbled. I saw from above my caravan friends Thought I was safe in my tunnel shade Until they heard no more of me And believed I got strayed. They forget me soon after And took the same known road Every time the passed the tunnel But to explore they never slowed. It hurts me not that I met my fate Alone and untimely a lot But I am sad that the mountain tunnel Is yet to cross another thought.
July 16th 2014
shailesh-otari
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Jul 16, 2014
Jul 16, 2014 at 6:31 AM UTC
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