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<|> v V v  writes:It is quite amazing to me that everything in life, love, relationships, survival, progress, growth, etc. .. it all boils down to some type of sacred balance.. a balance that is extremely precarious, and fragile... even the known universe follows a sacred balance, the seasons, the tides, day and night, if any of those balances slip, we no longer exist.. fascinating and brain bending truth” <|> 3:27AM there are somethings you just know read the words above, without hesitation, knew therein lay a poem co-missioned that required instantaneous creation, as if it was a observable commandment that need instant gratification, nay, more so, a relieving, an unburdening a lifting of a hearty blockage impeding, distressing my existence perhaps our lives are a life long attempts to keep A Balance, our individual and mutually conflicting of-all-our-imbalances, as they intersect and sway, on a flood plain, ever unstable and shifting, so many eddies colliding on the surface of a mighty river yes, there is something otherworldly here, yes, even sacred, in the finest sense of that overburdened word, so oft overemployed that one man’s overburdened sacred is another’s overworked profane but sacred is sacred at a level just above our collective reach, is an aspiration, a respiration and exhalation, we unconsciously try to time our breathing in coordination with our surroundings, grasping, gasping, grabbing for understanding, micro-management of the minutest current of water or air running contrary to the main current, that we plunge willingly and willfully into when we open our eyes every morning and confront a new array of illusions, allusions and conceive our own illustrations, and paint our lives and every act on a corner of fresh page of a giant, ponderous tome (or tomb, if you prefer) I know you understand. in a few hours, I will rise to be confronted by chaos and challenges, armed with bits of strings, tape and bows to wrap them into a cohesion, to present them to you, insert them into your eddy, and in the froth of poetic collision, is our constancy of connectivity and breakage, a perpetual reformation so that we may mind-bend into each other, verifying our mutual dependency and saying together, out loud and silently we exist, we edit, our eddies, our overlapping lives, in a never ending series of Venn diagrams all delicately balanced at a single point, forever transitory and reforming our language of calculus on a curve of constant change.
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Sep 18, 2023
Sep 18, 2023 at 4:19 AM UTC
v V v: The Sacred Balance
<|> v V v  writes:It is quite amazing to me that everything in life, love, relationships, survival, progress, growth, etc. .. it all boils down to some type of sacred balance.. a balance that is extremely precarious, and fragile... even the known universe follows a sacred balance, the seasons, the tides, day and night, if any of those balances slip, we no longer exist.. fascinating and brain bending truth” <|> 3:27AM there are somethings you just know read the words above, without hesitation, knew therein lay a poem co-missioned that required instantaneous creation, as if it was a observable commandment that need instant gratification, nay, more so, a relieving, an unburdening a lifting of a hearty blockage impeding, distressing my existence perhaps our lives are a life long attempts to keep A Balance, our individual and mutually conflicting of-all-our-imbalances, as they intersect and sway, on a flood plain, ever unstable and shifting, so many eddies colliding on the surface of a mighty river yes, there is something otherworldly here, yes, even sacred, in the finest sense of that overburdened word, so oft overemployed that one man’s overburdened sacred is another’s overworked profane but sacred is sacred at a level just above our collective reach, is an aspiration, a respiration and exhalation, we unconsciously try to time our breathing in coordination with our surroundings, grasping, gasping, grabbing for understanding, micro-management of the minutest current of water or air running contrary to the main current, that we plunge willingly and willfully into when we open our eyes every morning and confront a new array of illusions, allusions and conceive our own illustrations, and paint our lives and every act on a corner of fresh page of a giant, ponderous tome (or tomb, if you prefer) I know you understand. in a few hours, I will rise to be confronted by chaos and challenges, armed with bits of strings, tape and bows to wrap them into a cohesion, to present them to you, insert them into your eddy, and in the froth of poetic collision, is our constancy of connectivity and breakage, a perpetual reformation so that we may mind-bend into each other, verifying our mutual dependency and saying together, out loud and silently we exist, we edit, our eddies, our overlapping lives, in a never ending series of Venn diagrams all delicately balanced at a single point, forever transitory and reforming our language of calculus on a curve of constant change.
3:27 AM Mon Sep 18 2023 with the kind permission of v V v
nat-lipstadt
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Sep 18, 2023
Sep 18, 2023 at 4:19 AM UTC
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