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What once was stoic and only showed strength, now slowly sinks and melts... Like a castle of sand on the shore, fending off the teases from the playful waves of the rising tide - but failed. What once was rock... Now submits to forces that meant to erode and break. Pounding, battering and eating into the outer carapace I’ve prided for years. What once was armour I thought impervious and would deflect, now threatens to collapse into itself. Like a weak submersible made for the shallows yet dove too deep, anticipating the impending crush at the end.
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Oct 3, 2018
Oct 3, 2018 at 9:49 AM UTC
Crush
What once was stoic and only showed strength, now slowly sinks and melts... Like a castle of sand on the shore, fending off the teases from the playful waves of the rising tide - but failed. What once was rock... Now submits to forces that meant to erode and break. Pounding, battering and eating into the outer carapace I’ve prided for years. What once was armour I thought impervious and would deflect, now threatens to collapse into itself. Like a weak submersible made for the shallows yet dove too deep, anticipating the impending crush at the end.
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Oct 3, 2018
Oct 3, 2018 at 9:49 AM UTC
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