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The day after Janice’s gran had taken you to see the film The Ten Commandments you had gone with Janice to Jail Park to ride the swings and she talked of the film and the parting of the Red Sea and the drowning of the Pharaoh’s men and the horses and the writing on the two tablets of stone shame the horses had to drown too she said they hadn’t done anything wrong it’s a matter of being in the wrong place at the wrong time you said but those poor horses they didn’t ask to be the Pharaoh’s horses you swung high on the swing your feet reaching up towards the sky Janice was beside you she wasn’t swinging so high and those poor slaves she added pushing her swing higher by moving her legs and arms why were there slaves? why can’t people be nice to each other? I can imagine Cogan in my class being a bit of a pharaoh given the chance the fat *** you said maybe he’s not treated right at home she said maybe that’s why he’s like that no he’s just a prat you said who likes to bully other kids does he bully you? she asked he promises to smash my face in but when I waited for him the other day after school he didn’t show you said my gran said to be kind to people and try to see their better side Janice said I do try you said but his ugly dial gets in the way and she laughed and said we mustn’t laugh it’s a shame when people have to bully others I’m sure he’s got a good side your feet were now almost touching the sky’s rim well if he has he must keep it in his pants you said she smiled and shook her head her brown sandals and white socks seemed to scrape the sky’s skin but gran said Janice almost sang that none of us is free of sin and her voice drifted off into the blue just the two swings on that Monday morning and Janice and you.
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Jun 17, 2013
Jun 17, 2013 at 2:29 AM UTC
AFTER THE TEN COMMANDMENTS.
The day after Janice’s gran had taken you to see the film The Ten Commandments you had gone with Janice to Jail Park to ride the swings and she talked of the film and the parting of the Red Sea and the drowning of the Pharaoh’s men and the horses and the writing on the two tablets of stone shame the horses had to drown too she said they hadn’t done anything wrong it’s a matter of being in the wrong place at the wrong time you said but those poor horses they didn’t ask to be the Pharaoh’s horses you swung high on the swing your feet reaching up towards the sky Janice was beside you she wasn’t swinging so high and those poor slaves she added pushing her swing higher by moving her legs and arms why were there slaves? why can’t people be nice to each other? I can imagine Cogan in my class being a bit of a pharaoh given the chance the fat *** you said maybe he’s not treated right at home she said maybe that’s why he’s like that no he’s just a prat you said who likes to bully other kids does he bully you? she asked he promises to smash my face in but when I waited for him the other day after school he didn’t show you said my gran said to be kind to people and try to see their better side Janice said I do try you said but his ugly dial gets in the way and she laughed and said we mustn’t laugh it’s a shame when people have to bully others I’m sure he’s got a good side your feet were now almost touching the sky’s rim well if he has he must keep it in his pants you said she smiled and shook her head her brown sandals and white socks seemed to scrape the sky’s skin but gran said Janice almost sang that none of us is free of sin and her voice drifted off into the blue just the two swings on that Monday morning and Janice and you.
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Jun 17, 2013
Jun 17, 2013 at 2:29 AM UTC
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