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do you know how many times i've had to suffer through the same tired metaphors over and over and over again. put down your tears and your stars and your cigarettes and your coffee and your waves and your skies and your hearts and your bruises and pick up your pen and write something worth living for god **** it. because i haven't read a poem from the heart in years and all your elaborate conceits and sadness and promises and "i love you"s and lips and dreams are getting on my ******* nerves. rage against the stereotypes and conventions and rage against Petrarchan and Romantic and Post ******* Modern love. Don't write something because you feel like it. Write something because you would explode if you didnt
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 5:34 AM UTC
your writing is as shallow as your soul
do you know how many times i've had to suffer through the same tired metaphors over and over and over again. put down your tears and your stars and your cigarettes and your coffee and your waves and your skies and your hearts and your bruises and pick up your pen and write something worth living for god **** it. because i haven't read a poem from the heart in years and all your elaborate conceits and sadness and promises and "i love you"s and lips and dreams are getting on my ******* nerves. rage against the stereotypes and conventions and rage against Petrarchan and Romantic and Post ******* Modern love. Don't write something because you feel like it. Write something because you would explode if you didnt
to all the conceited writers.
jeremy-2
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May 19, 2013
May 19, 2013 at 5:34 AM UTC
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