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It starts like a spinning top Hypnotically spirals Then it swirls Round like a hurricane I look into the eye of the storm It seems to smoulder Delicate and warm Yet distant Unstoppable and yet serene The vortex drowning my thoughts Swirling me round A turbulent sea But I feel also peaceful Overcome with serenity Harmonious music Drunk on its melody Does it draw me Towards rocks or bliss? This shimmering cocktail Sweet and heady Why is everything so hazy? Is it steam? Is that a swirling bath? An aromatic lagoon Stirred by a gentle hand Soft skin and porcelain Inviting me in Beckoning me in Does it invite me Or does the door close? Leaving me indignant And alone in the dark Like a ballerina Ever faster, ever lighter Seeming as if to rise With each revolution Up and up it goes Swirling and swirling Now slower and slower As it quietly dissipates It circles now above me Finned silhouettes overhead Swimming around and around I hope they’re not sharks.
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Jul 6, 2019
Jul 6, 2019 at 5:28 PM UTC
Whirlpool
It starts like a spinning top Hypnotically spirals Then it swirls Round like a hurricane I look into the eye of the storm It seems to smoulder Delicate and warm Yet distant Unstoppable and yet serene The vortex drowning my thoughts Swirling me round A turbulent sea But I feel also peaceful Overcome with serenity Harmonious music Drunk on its melody Does it draw me Towards rocks or bliss? This shimmering cocktail Sweet and heady Why is everything so hazy? Is it steam? Is that a swirling bath? An aromatic lagoon Stirred by a gentle hand Soft skin and porcelain Inviting me in Beckoning me in Does it invite me Or does the door close? Leaving me indignant And alone in the dark Like a ballerina Ever faster, ever lighter Seeming as if to rise With each revolution Up and up it goes Swirling and swirling Now slower and slower As it quietly dissipates It circles now above me Finned silhouettes overhead Swimming around and around I hope they’re not sharks.
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32/M/Aberdeen
Jul 6, 2019
Jul 6, 2019 at 5:28 PM UTC
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