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I was sitting on a train with my pad and a pen, trying to write a poem. I had no title, but I had written down the first line ...I was sitting on a train with my pad... A man sat opposite me. After a minute or so of scanning his paper and throwing cursory looks in my direction he enquiried "What are you writing?" "I'm trying to write a poem about a man trying to write a poem on a train who gets asked by a stranger 'what are you writing'. "Can I be in it?", asked the stranger opposite. "You already are", I replied. The train pulled out of the station.
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Dec 29, 2012
Dec 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM UTC
Trying to write a poem while on a train
I was sitting on a train with my pad and a pen, trying to write a poem. I had no title, but I had written down the first line ...I was sitting on a train with my pad... A man sat opposite me. After a minute or so of scanning his paper and throwing cursory looks in my direction he enquiried "What are you writing?" "I'm trying to write a poem about a man trying to write a poem on a train who gets asked by a stranger 'what are you writing'. "Can I be in it?", asked the stranger opposite. "You already are", I replied. The train pulled out of the station.
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Dec 29, 2012
Dec 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM UTC
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