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Your Surface caresses – the face – Warm when the Sun is high, When the Storm brews – you’re like a Whip – How the Stars and Moon weigh, Affecting your Tide upon us Your Voice – is convincing – Your Whispers – like Salt – on our wounds, Though, through castles – slicing – Built towards the Sky – by guided hands – Curling over, crashing Onto – raw – from tears shed – your Storms – Born from Vengeance – washing – Tainting what is held at – the heart – Walls – swallowed – by shallow Bitterness forced – our way – footprints Swept – yet – we will follow
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Jan 20, 2010
Jan 20, 2010 at 6:08 AM UTC
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Your Surface caresses – the face – Warm when the Sun is high, When the Storm brews – you’re like a Whip – How the Stars and Moon weigh, Affecting your Tide upon us Your Voice – is convincing – Your Whispers – like Salt – on our wounds, Though, through castles – slicing – Built towards the Sky – by guided hands – Curling over, crashing Onto – raw – from tears shed – your Storms – Born from Vengeance – washing – Tainting what is held at – the heart – Walls – swallowed – by shallow Bitterness forced – our way – footprints Swept – yet – we will follow
Written as an assignment in high school intending to mock the style of Emily Dickinson.
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Jan 20, 2010
Jan 20, 2010 at 6:08 AM UTC
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