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Pain was the charcoal cloud that draped over me weighing me down like a wet packing blanket until I could no longer take another step dropping to my knees only to stare at my hands pressed against the concrete floor as the cold hard rain pounded relentlessly over and over reminding me to stay down with no sign of hope punishing myself A constant suffering because I had no control of my mind and I’ll never know why
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May 11, 2020
May 11, 2020 at 11:21 PM UTC
No Control
Pain was the charcoal cloud that draped over me weighing me down like a wet packing blanket until I could no longer take another step dropping to my knees only to stare at my hands pressed against the concrete floor as the cold hard rain pounded relentlessly over and over reminding me to stay down with no sign of hope punishing myself A constant suffering because I had no control of my mind and I’ll never know why
DonFranciscoLuis
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44/M/Bayonne, N.J.
May 11, 2020
May 11, 2020 at 11:21 PM UTC
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