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Up before the birds, before the sheep and the barking farm dogs have had a chance to rise, before the sun in a waking sky has washed her face there is me, and the rabbits of course, there are always nibbling rabbits they pay me no heed as I ignore them, cobwebby air that smells of wet stone walls and hazelenuts a damp little mourning for summer still with us, but only just she is fading, her breath grown stale what was once a fine full featured woman of elegant proportions is not the girl she was and somewhat over-ripe, shriveled hag or blousy old **** who knows, september will see to that he could be kind and let her keep her looks for a bit, a single singing sheep, baas contralto through the fence followed by her sisters, one of whom is definitely flat, which stirs the dogs, then birds, and a raven’s mocking call from the trees coughing tractors vape their owners into life and the radio clicks, because apparently the old ***** won’t start! a jostling theatre crowd of noise and neighbours Mrs O’Malley from the farm up the road is out for her power walk with Dan, she waves at the gate Dan wags his tail and eyes my biscuit, tough luck Dan, she is watching, I have not come to the world the world has come to me all along the valley they are waking now a glorious cacophany the Cavershiveen volcano rumbles into being except for him indoors, he’s still snoring like a bull in a minute I will take him tea and biscuits wake him gently from his beige accountant dreams whatever they are? and we can start the day together except of course mine started long ago with only the silent sky and the hills for company he will never know that I embraced the dawn and sipped my coffee with the old gods Lugh and Dagda and Brigid I have been their respectful guest ancient Irish faces he will never know unless I choose to tell him so
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Aug 22, 2025
Aug 22, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
Saint Brigid
Up before the birds, before the sheep and the barking farm dogs have had a chance to rise, before the sun in a waking sky has washed her face there is me, and the rabbits of course, there are always nibbling rabbits they pay me no heed as I ignore them, cobwebby air that smells of wet stone walls and hazelenuts a damp little mourning for summer still with us, but only just she is fading, her breath grown stale what was once a fine full featured woman of elegant proportions is not the girl she was and somewhat over-ripe, shriveled hag or blousy old **** who knows, september will see to that he could be kind and let her keep her looks for a bit, a single singing sheep, baas contralto through the fence followed by her sisters, one of whom is definitely flat, which stirs the dogs, then birds, and a raven’s mocking call from the trees coughing tractors vape their owners into life and the radio clicks, because apparently the old ***** won’t start! a jostling theatre crowd of noise and neighbours Mrs O’Malley from the farm up the road is out for her power walk with Dan, she waves at the gate Dan wags his tail and eyes my biscuit, tough luck Dan, she is watching, I have not come to the world the world has come to me all along the valley they are waking now a glorious cacophany the Cavershiveen volcano rumbles into being except for him indoors, he’s still snoring like a bull in a minute I will take him tea and biscuits wake him gently from his beige accountant dreams whatever they are? and we can start the day together except of course mine started long ago with only the silent sky and the hills for company he will never know that I embraced the dawn and sipped my coffee with the old gods Lugh and Dagda and Brigid I have been their respectful guest ancient Irish faces he will never know unless I choose to tell him so
Recovering from covid in the Kerry hills
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Aug 22, 2025
Aug 22, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
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