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On her velvet lips Reddest at night, Before the slips Of careless slight, A smile that grips My heart tight Plays, and strips Me of each right.
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Apr 9, 2019
Apr 9, 2019 at 10:03 AM UTC
The Smile
On her velvet lips Reddest at night, Before the slips Of careless slight, A smile that grips My heart tight Plays, and strips Me of each right.
Since there seems to be some confusion about certain words, here is the explanation I gave in the comments. The whole poem is essentially one continuous line/thought. On her velvet lips, that are reddest at night, before the slips (slips referring to slips of tongue, much like you would say with a term like 'Freudian Slip') of careless slight (slight meaning an insult) there plays a smile that grips my heart tight and strips of me of each right I have.
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Apr 9, 2019
Apr 9, 2019 at 10:03 AM UTC
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