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If Rihanna and Bob Marley had a baby, it would be her. She was as fierce as peace can be. Born in the suburbs, I had never seen coffee-colored rastas with caramel tips, pulled back from a shaven head into a ponytail. She skated in an oversized hoodie across San Marcos square — a watering hole for porteños playing hippie. Mad man strummed ukuleles wildly; couples dancing interpretively; jugglers rode on unicycles, as if they were all training for a jester convention. Still, I couldn’t tear my eyes from her broken strands tied in knots swinging freely. Her sea-foam stare met my blue gaze. I looked like a dork; my hair plastered and sweaty. I wore a black tank top, waiting for another bus to another city. She dismissed her band of perros and grasped my hand, asking me if I wanted to sleep by the river with her. It was late so I said yes. We walked from the yellow lights of the town square. She grimaced. No more bones for starving dogs. I wasn’t starving, just lost, a traveler, dried from a bucketful of adventures, I dreaded repeating as empty stories over and over and over. O Celia, you were a coyote wearing a hoodie; no one could tame you, refracted by the white light of the moon that embraced each of your steps by the shrubbery-ridden riverside. I stumbled as we approached an embankment sheltered by magic trees, the glistening water chilled waves to perked ears; reflections of villagers, we pitched tents together, tipi-ed by the ritual of finding niche in transition. You built the fire; I prepared the mate; your weary locks whispered callejero wisdom. Your stories were everything I wanted to say, but too timid to be. You were dancing in my basement, bathing in moonlight ******* unashamed to say how good the water felt. You probably lost your virginity in your tent; shadows of leaves shaking a disturbed night, unlike I, crying, semi-drunk, wishing I hadn’t. You actually played the guitar; you bought it yourself; it was tied to the skateboard you drug behind on open roads. I got a guitar for my birthday after watching Lindsay Lohan be a rockstar in a movie once. I was inspired to play for a while. Then it just sat in my room. So you taught me your favorite song, Legalizenla We didn’t even have a porro — you wished we did. But all I wanted was to memorize those chords So you listened to me play them out of tune for hours, pressing my fingers on the fretboard like butter. Strums shuddered my soul. You wrote the lyrics in my journal with the note, con mucho amor. Now, each time I dust off my guitar, I warm up with that song   to remember your vibrations.
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 6:16 PM UTC
Celia
If Rihanna and Bob Marley had a baby, it would be her. She was as fierce as peace can be. Born in the suburbs, I had never seen coffee-colored rastas with caramel tips, pulled back from a shaven head into a ponytail. She skated in an oversized hoodie across San Marcos square — a watering hole for porteños playing hippie. Mad man strummed ukuleles wildly; couples dancing interpretively; jugglers rode on unicycles, as if they were all training for a jester convention. Still, I couldn’t tear my eyes from her broken strands tied in knots swinging freely. Her sea-foam stare met my blue gaze. I looked like a dork; my hair plastered and sweaty. I wore a black tank top, waiting for another bus to another city. She dismissed her band of perros and grasped my hand, asking me if I wanted to sleep by the river with her. It was late so I said yes. We walked from the yellow lights of the town square. She grimaced. No more bones for starving dogs. I wasn’t starving, just lost, a traveler, dried from a bucketful of adventures, I dreaded repeating as empty stories over and over and over. O Celia, you were a coyote wearing a hoodie; no one could tame you, refracted by the white light of the moon that embraced each of your steps by the shrubbery-ridden riverside. I stumbled as we approached an embankment sheltered by magic trees, the glistening water chilled waves to perked ears; reflections of villagers, we pitched tents together, tipi-ed by the ritual of finding niche in transition. You built the fire; I prepared the mate; your weary locks whispered callejero wisdom. Your stories were everything I wanted to say, but too timid to be. You were dancing in my basement, bathing in moonlight ******* unashamed to say how good the water felt. You probably lost your virginity in your tent; shadows of leaves shaking a disturbed night, unlike I, crying, semi-drunk, wishing I hadn’t. You actually played the guitar; you bought it yourself; it was tied to the skateboard you drug behind on open roads. I got a guitar for my birthday after watching Lindsay Lohan be a rockstar in a movie once. I was inspired to play for a while. Then it just sat in my room. So you taught me your favorite song, Legalizenla We didn’t even have a porro — you wished we did. But all I wanted was to memorize those chords So you listened to me play them out of tune for hours, pressing my fingers on the fretboard like butter. Strums shuddered my soul. You wrote the lyrics in my journal with the note, con mucho amor. Now, each time I dust off my guitar, I warm up with that song   to remember your vibrations.
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courtney-pruitt
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Aug 29, 2014
Aug 29, 2014 at 6:16 PM UTC
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