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Those wishes were never fulfilled, although there were so many lights announcing the arrival of adulthood as if it were something to celebrate inside a body full of sorrows. Don't wait for me! Cut your heart in half and then tear up your soul, and I'll know if you are ready to break these chains. So many promises, so little time; this thought chases me even as I chase the wasted years with a youth based on wished. Oh so many celebrations, so little time! Wait another year! Look at these seventeen candles and then wait for the last, and I'll know if you are ready to wait until the month of June. If aging means to forget my innocence, so I get old day by day, without will to take back everything I lost after some flames were put out. Flames which celebrate the absence of freedom, freedom which dies when there's no youth. Please wait until you get old! Until there's a solution, until there's no problem and I'll ask if you are ready to blow the candles out.
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Jul 30, 2014
Jul 30, 2014 at 12:06 PM UTC
The Candles
Those wishes were never fulfilled, although there were so many lights announcing the arrival of adulthood as if it were something to celebrate inside a body full of sorrows. Don't wait for me! Cut your heart in half and then tear up your soul, and I'll know if you are ready to break these chains. So many promises, so little time; this thought chases me even as I chase the wasted years with a youth based on wished. Oh so many celebrations, so little time! Wait another year! Look at these seventeen candles and then wait for the last, and I'll know if you are ready to wait until the month of June. If aging means to forget my innocence, so I get old day by day, without will to take back everything I lost after some flames were put out. Flames which celebrate the absence of freedom, freedom which dies when there's no youth. Please wait until you get old! Until there's a solution, until there's no problem and I'll ask if you are ready to blow the candles out.
jonasgoncalves
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Jul 30, 2014
Jul 30, 2014 at 12:06 PM UTC
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