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~for M. G.~ who discerned in a witty three words, my essence, perfumed~ <> we all have in our own(ed) personal debtors prison, a chained inner child asking always: Am I there yet ? sad smiling, a 'no you are not,' for to freedom day to arrive, the child must unlock the chains, no one else can be permissioned! someday he'll, rebelent, will comprehend that wishing insufficient, asking nice, once, thrice, millions can’t break the padlock, And you have to walk away from the inner child, Leave it to starve Leave it to die Leave it to be free And just a regular grown-up guy! So saddened There will be no return There will be no funeral No keepsake memories For the keeping No capital letters Just a path Large yellow arrow pointing This a way Bluntly and without fuss, un accompanied by any special invitation, You leave behind the writhing child plodding forward, Slightly offkilter, slightly off balance, But no longer writhing, Just drifting from the course, Ever so slightly Which is drama plenty, But there is no morning mourning for the child left behind
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May 29, 2025
May 29, 2025 at 12:59 PM UTC
My Writhing Child
~for M. G.~ who discerned in a witty three words, my essence, perfumed~ <> we all have in our own(ed) personal debtors prison, a chained inner child asking always: Am I there yet ? sad smiling, a 'no you are not,' for to freedom day to arrive, the child must unlock the chains, no one else can be permissioned! someday he'll, rebelent, will comprehend that wishing insufficient, asking nice, once, thrice, millions can’t break the padlock, And you have to walk away from the inner child, Leave it to starve Leave it to die Leave it to be free And just a regular grown-up guy! So saddened There will be no return There will be no funeral No keepsake memories For the keeping No capital letters Just a path Large yellow arrow pointing This a way Bluntly and without fuss, un accompanied by any special invitation, You leave behind the writhing child plodding forward, Slightly offkilter, slightly off balance, But no longer writhing, Just drifting from the course, Ever so slightly Which is drama plenty, But there is no morning mourning for the child left behind
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May 29, 2025
May 29, 2025 at 12:59 PM UTC
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