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When does vanity Bleed into betterment And feeling bad Start to feel good Fasting is fine when Erasing your waist Now you like the hunger More than the taste It's an eating disorder Until you're an expert Then it's a miracle Admirable effort Staring in a mirror Narcissism at its peak But now your face is slim And your body "tea" We chide girls for vanity But praise every change Into a "better you" Adding fuel to their hate
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May 14
May 14, 2026 at 11:42 PM UTC
Not an ED if it works
When does vanity Bleed into betterment And feeling bad Start to feel good Fasting is fine when Erasing your waist Now you like the hunger More than the taste It's an eating disorder Until you're an expert Then it's a miracle Admirable effort Staring in a mirror Narcissism at its peak But now your face is slim And your body "tea" We chide girls for vanity But praise every change Into a "better you" Adding fuel to their hate
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May 14
May 14, 2026 at 11:42 PM UTC
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