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A beginning a middle an end then again. Formulaic throughout to the bitter end. Try something new don't let it end with you repeating the same old thing again. Structured perfectly a copy cat's excuse studying rhymes he could never write even if given 'til the end of time. It's not because it's telling it's just telling of you thinking in another man's cursive hiding that you have none and would never know what to do. Where's the message your meaning is lacking just alliterated sonnets hiding an absence of depth in you.
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May 27, 2016
May 27, 2016 at 10:27 PM UTC
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A beginning a middle an end then again. Formulaic throughout to the bitter end. Try something new don't let it end with you repeating the same old thing again. Structured perfectly a copy cat's excuse studying rhymes he could never write even if given 'til the end of time. It's not because it's telling it's just telling of you thinking in another man's cursive hiding that you have none and would never know what to do. Where's the message your meaning is lacking just alliterated sonnets hiding an absence of depth in you.
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May 27, 2016
May 27, 2016 at 10:27 PM UTC
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