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With pleading eyes filled with tears All hope was fading fast She knelt in submission to the one Who should be the last Immense pain inflicted deeply now No choice was left to make To the one she hated most she bowed As his life she vowed to take Taken from the one she loved against her will Her eyes shot sparks of fire Still holding on with heart pride filled Great courage she acquired With strength unknown to men of skill She lunges for his knife Takes back the pride that he did steal When he took her as his wife
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May 9, 2010
May 9, 2010 at 12:12 PM UTC
Pride Retaken
With pleading eyes filled with tears All hope was fading fast She knelt in submission to the one Who should be the last Immense pain inflicted deeply now No choice was left to make To the one she hated most she bowed As his life she vowed to take Taken from the one she loved against her will Her eyes shot sparks of fire Still holding on with heart pride filled Great courage she acquired With strength unknown to men of skill She lunges for his knife Takes back the pride that he did steal When he took her as his wife
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May 9, 2010
May 9, 2010 at 12:12 PM UTC
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