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I don't fear falling. The fall excites me. To be completely free for that short amount of time. Who wouldn't want that? I feel it would be much better than drowning, the impact, so to say, would be quicker. No, What scares me is hitting the ground. The fleeting moments of intense pain, The thoughts racing through your mind, The pain of your loved ones coming to you, When you realize what you've done before It's All Over.
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Jan 25, 2014
Jan 25, 2014 at 8:45 PM UTC
The Impact of the Ground
I don't fear falling. The fall excites me. To be completely free for that short amount of time. Who wouldn't want that? I feel it would be much better than drowning, the impact, so to say, would be quicker. No, What scares me is hitting the ground. The fleeting moments of intense pain, The thoughts racing through your mind, The pain of your loved ones coming to you, When you realize what you've done before It's All Over.
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Jan 25, 2014
Jan 25, 2014 at 8:45 PM UTC
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